My Avatar Fan Fic called Shieara's Story

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Ch 1: The run away
I'm thinking of doing the footnote things so if you see numbers then go to the bottom to read about it. Oh yeah and the parenthesis are the writer's thoughts or comments about the story. Friends, classmates and fellow Americans I now present to you my story! (Cheers, screams, and clapping)

"Wake up Shieara, today's the day you go to the Fire lord as a treaty." said maid June. She was specially trained to handle my personality but that doesn't mean that she knows what she's doing. June had black hair that was short but long enough to be tied into a bun. "What, I'm not going anywhere. I- I'll run away! "I said but then I calmed down.

“Here I'll give you 100 gold pieces, so you can be free." I offered as I gave June the money.

"What I can't take you-" June was cut off but she pushed it away. (1.)

"But you have to promise not to tell anyone." I continued. June nodded and took the money. She knew that she wouldn't win. (2.)

Feeling assured that I was going to be able to leave I grabbed my tiara, staff, some money, supplies and my cat and walked to the forest. Then a guard yelled for me to stop and I so wasn't going to do that so I started to run. I kept sprinting until I bumped into something fluffy. I fell and hit my head on a rock. (3.) To be continued (June's name doesn't mean anything)

1.) Who gives up an offer for freedom and money anyway? That's not smart thinking.

2.) After all, who can argue with this face?

3.) I made an important discovery that day: rocks hurt!

Ch 2: Newfound friends
I woke up, “Where… am I?” I said as I remembered and stood up.

“Please… don’t turn me… in to the king… because he’s after me.” I pleaded.

“It’s okay you’re safe now. Why is he after you?” A girl asked.

“He wants… to give me to the… Fire Nation.” I replied.

“What did you do?” A boy with Air Nomad tattoos said. Of course being as out of breath as I was I collapsed to the ground before I could answer. (1.)

“Are you ok?” A little blind girl asked.

“Yeah I just… need to… catch my breath.” I replied.

In about 10 minutes my breathing and heart rate returned to normal but my legs were still a little woozy. I tried to stand up and fell a little. The boy with the air nomad tattoos grabbed me. “Thanks.” I said as I looked at his hands. They had the same tattoos as my grandma on them. There was only one reason for that… he was an air bender. "I wonder if I have a long lost cousin or something… no that can’t be it. Maybe he’s the avatar!” I thought. I grabbed his hand to inspect it some more. He pulled away.

“It’s not what you thing it is ok?” He said.

“Oh yes it is! You’re an air bender. It’s not me! Thank the deities!” I replied happily.

“What do you mean it’s not you?” He asked.

“I’m not the avatar. I can’t handle that and being the Pr- uhhhh… princess, yeah that’s it, princess of a kingdom too.” I replied.

“Why would you be the avatar?” the older girl asked.

“I am an air bender too.” I replied. To be continued.

1.) Of course I’m tired. The forest is about 5 miles away from the palace and I came about 2 miles into it. I ran the whole time.

Ch 3: Shieara revealed
"No way you can't be; I'm the last one." the boy said unbelieving.

"That's what I thought too. My name is Shieara Sakie; let me tell you my story.......... My Great Great Grandma could see the future, she could tell you what but not when. One day she saw the attack and tried to warn everyone. They thought she was crazy. Don't you hate it when people think you're crazy? Anyways she eventually moved, married an Earth nation Prince, and so here I am. After the war started, my family had to hide our air bending to avoid attacks. Later, if you want, I could do a demonstration." I explained.

“I believe her.” The little blind girl said.

“Hey you’re an earth bender aren’t you?” I said.

“Yep, I’m the best earth bender in the world.” She said.

“Cool!” I replied. Then I continued my story.

“My Great Great grandmother wrote all her bending moves down so my family could learn to bend." I explained.

"Wait a second, married a prince?" said a boy as he gobbled down jerky. (1.)

"Yep that's what happened; who are you guys anyway? I've seen you somewhere before." I said thinking to hard.

"My name's Katara, this is Aang, Toph, and this pig is Sokka. You couldn't have seen us before, this is the first time we'd ever been to this kingdom" The girl replied.

I stopped listening when I saw a bison, "Wow you guys have a flying bison? I've looked everywhere for one!" (2.) I said hoping I could ride it with my newfound almost friends.

Aang stood up, "His name is Appa."

Just then, a lemur ran by chasing a bug. "Aww it's so cute. What's its name?" I asked.

"His name is Momo." Aang replied. To be continued.

1.) Didn't I just say that?

2.) I seriously looked in every nation, most of the islands, every continent, and I even tried to bring one back from the dead.

[imwiccan]

I forgot to say that every name, color, and rock means something. if you figure them out then you're cool! (Seriously, i don't have a prize except giving you karma but i don't think i can) Anyways, Shieara's name and June's name don't mean anything.
Blessed be

[imwiccan]

Ch 4: A power exposed
I was chasing Momo; he climbed up a tree. I did the same; Momo climbed down the tree. (1.) I bent a pocket of air to slow my descend.

When I landed Momo was gone, "Where did he go?" I said to myself. Momo peaked out from behind a rock. "There you are." I said and started to run.

Momo ran too, swerving between rocks and trees until, suddenly, he stopped. He was cornered. I caught him, "Aww he's so cute!" I said. I pet his fur and scratched him under his chin. Then we walked back to camp. "Hey I caught your lemur, he's a fast runner." I said. Then I stopped and put my hand on my forehead.
(This is when Shieara has a vision of the future)
{I saw the guards searching for me. They searched in the houses and in the mines. (2.) They know where I like to hide so it wasn't long before they made it to the forest. (3.) Then I returned to the present.}

"We need to move camp, now." I said.

"Why now, we just set up camp a few hours ago?" Sokka questioned.

"We just do, listen, I have visions too. I just saw the palace guards, soon there going to attack us" I replied. (4.) To be continued.

1.) Having grown up in this place, I have climbed up the trees so many times. It was no trouble at all

2.) I like to play in the mines and dig for rocks.

3.) Or it might have been the tattletale guard that saw me run into the woods.

4.) My visions let me see what will happen if I don't take action. They also let me see the future that WILL happen no matter what I do. Unfortunatly, i can't tell the difference between them.

Ch 5: On the move
"Come on we need to move camp!" I stated as I blew the fire out. (1.)

"Isis? Isis, where are you? Has anyone seen my cat?" I asked.

"Here she is, come here kitty." Katara said, as she picked her up. We packed every thing, and flew away.

Everyone except Toph and I looked back and saw the guards (2.) and they wondered why I knew that they were coming. "This is so cool; I'm riding on a flying bison!" I couldn't be happier.

"If you¡¦re a princess then where is your tiara?" Sokka questioned.

"Right here just don't break it, it's the only thing left to remind me of my mother." I warned.

After we'd been flying for a while I said, "This should be far enough, sense we past the river they won't chase us. (3.) Then we landed in another part of the forest. To be continued.

1.) With air bending

2.) I didn't need to look because I saw it already and of course if you watch the show you know why Toph didn't look.

3.) Because they wouldn't think I could get that far on foot. You need a boat to get a cross but all the boat sellers and owners wouldn't sell to me because I'd need an escort or something stupid like that. Can I be something else besides a princess please? (No) Ah come on. (No.) Fine meanie. (You're such a kid.) I know, but that's why you love me right? (Yeah I guess.)

Ch 6: They don't trust me
After we set up camp, Aang and I were racing in the trees.

"Don't use your avatar speed, that's cheating." I said.

"Okay, I won't." Aang said as he started to run.

"Are you sure we can trust her?" Katara asked.

"Yeah she's a nice girl, and she can see the future, that is very helpful." Sokka replied.

"I know but she could be working for the Fire Nation." Katara said.

"She didn't give us any reason not to trust her." Sokka replied. Katara heard voices in the distance and Toph felt the vibrations.

"Shh, they're coming back." She whispered.

"I win, I beat the avatar!" I said proudly. I really like to win.

"Ok you win. So you can see the future huh?" Aang questioned.

"Among other things." I said without thinking.
"Like what?" Katara asked.

I knew that Katara didn't trust me, so I answered. "Morphing, telekinesis, empathy, and telepathy. That's all I have so far." I said. I could tell they didn't know what I was talking about. To be continued

[imwiccan]

aw come on ppl. reply! plz? I won't post more until someone replies and tells me how good or bad my story is. Oh yeah and just so you know, i wrote this story before i saw the day of black sun so if info is wrong srry. I'm not changing it b/c i think it's great as it is. by the way i didn't see all of the of the show either so srry... again
blessed be

[FourNations93]

I'm sorta confused actually.. and between each source of dialogue can you write

"Hi," said Sally.

"Hi," Bob said back.

"Wassup?"


instead of

"Hi," said Sally. "Hi," Bob said back. "Wassup?"


It would be so much easier to read!



Good story so far though, you just need more detail XD

[imwiccan]

oh ok. thanks for your reply! i think i can change that. i'll go work on it now. my teacher said to do that too but i wrote to for nick.com and you can only have a certian amount of characters per reply so that's why i did that. I'll fix it and thank you for reading! *to my self* yay first replier! lol
blessed be

[FourNations93]

lol! Glad I was the first then.. it makes me feel special XD lol

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Ch 7 part 1: Telekinesis
"Ok, Telekinesis is... well I don't really know. My mom always called it that. All I can do is show you." I said. I outstretched my arm; all of a sudden, Momo lifted off the ground and was floating through the air.

"This is telekinesis." I demonstrated; then I put him down.

"How heavy can you lift?" Sokka asked.

"I don't know I never had to try." I said.

"Try to lift me!" Aang said.

"Ok, but I've lifted my bed with ease so people are a snap." I replied.

I held out my hand, and Aang lifted off the ground. Then I put him down. "Try to lift Appa." Katara suggested.

"Ok I'll try." I said with a look of complete amazement, and shock on my face. (1.) I had to use two hands because Appa was so big. They could see a purple light form around my hands. Then they could see one around Appa as he lifted off the ground. They stood there in awe. I put him down.

"What can you morph into?" Katara said after her shock subsided. To be continued.

1.) Are you kidding me? Appa is like ten tons in weight I think. That's like a human trying to lift all my clothes without using a pulley system. Okay but if I pull a brain muscle it's your fault.

Ch 7 part 2: Morphing
"Morphing lets me change my outer appearance into anything I touch (1.), see, or remember. If I hear their voice I can change that too." I explained to make sure everyone was on the same page.

"Let me demonstrate. Where's Momo?" I said, looking for him. "There you are." I thought aloud. I touched Momo and morphed into an exact replica.

Then Momo spoke; I changed my voice and talked to him. "Hey Momo, what do you think of Sokka?" I asked. (2.)

"He doesn't like me. He thinks my ears are big, but have you looked at his?" He said.

"Yeah, is that why you steal his food?" I replied.

"Yep, he really needs to hide it better." Momo said. We laughed and I changed back.

"Momo says you need to hide your food better, Sokka." I said laughing.

"So he's stealing my food! Come here big ears!" Sokka yelled.

Momo jumped on the safety of Aang's shoulder.

Does that work on people too?" Katara asked suspiciously.

"Yeah it does, want to see?" I answered.

"Yeah. Change into me!!!" Aang said.

"Ok." I said. I touched Aang and morphed. To be continued.

1.) The touch thing works best because you take a scan of the person you change into. That way it prevents mistakes because you can't always trust your memory.

2.) I can feel the tension between them and I used my telepathic abilities to figure out what he was saying. You see I can’t talk to animals. Only Shula can do that… you’ll see.

Ch 7 part 3: Empathy
"Ok what is empathy?" Toph asked as I changed back.

"Empathy is the ability to read peoples emotions." I said.

Katara looked nervous. "Why are you so nervous? I mean besides the fact that you don't want me to feel bad about you not trusting me." I said.

"Well you see I-" Katara was cut off.

"It's ok I don't really care, the truth is I still think that you will turn me into my father. I don't blame you. If I were in your position I'd do the same thing." I explained.

"So your not mad because the last time-" Katara was cut off again.

"No, of course not." I interrupted.

But I was lying; it did upset me, very much. I was nothing but honest and helpful, just like always. I even told them my secret, something I haven’t talked about sense before my mother died. Something I was never to talk about to humans again. To be continued

Ch 7 part 4: Telepathy
"What's telepathy?" Sokka said unbelieving.

"Telepathy is the ability to read peop- minds." I said but corrected myself.

"Ok then, read my mind." Sokka replied and then he thought of something. I read his mind; he was thinking of those little cakes that faeries like. (1.)

"You’re thinking of those little cakes that faeri- I mean that you can only get from the baker on Kyoshie Island." I answered.

"Wow that's exactly what I was thinking." Sokka said. Katara was even more suspicious than when she first met me. She seemed to be the only one, as far as I could tell.

"Katara do you want me to read your mind next?" I asked just to see if I could mess with her.

"No I'm fine, but thanks for asking." Katara said.

"Ok I'll try to stay out of your minds, ok everybody?" I said. I only used it to let me know when a mystical being was near anyway.

"Yes please stay out of our minds." Katara said for everybody. To be continued.

1.) Faeries LOVE sweets. I mean they really really love sweets. That’s about all they eat in the faeirie realm.

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Chapter 8: To the Market
"So what kind of bender has those powers anyway?" Aang asked.

"I don't know, I think I have witch in my blood." I said very unsure looking. Then I quickly changed the subject before they could ask any more questions.

"Is anyone else hungry? I'm starving." I asked rubbing my stomach.They didn't have anything to eat. "We can't go to the market; everyone will turn me in to my dad. Unless you guys go, I'll stay with the camp." I said.

"But we don't have any money and Toph’s card isn’t taken here." Katara said.

"I'll take care of that." I replied as I pulled a lot of money out of my pocket.

"Wow that's a lot of money, where did you get it?" Sokka asked.

"I took it out of my savings box before I left. I'd been saving sense I was three." I explained. Then they left.

Soon after, I got bored watching Momo eat flies, so I decided to practice telekinesis. I was lifting big rocks when Isis jumped on my shoulder, losing my concentration. The rocks broke into tiny, sharp pieces and were flung everywhere.

As I was inspecting myself for cuts, I found one and saw it heal almost instantly. Now, being the curious Shieara we all know and love, I wondered if I could heal other stuff too. I looked at Isis; she was hurt. "Hold still Isis. I'll fix that right up, I hope." I said. (1.)

I instinctively waved my hand and a blackish silver mist formed around the wounds, healing them very quickly. "Neat, that is very useful. Maybe after this I could be a doctor." I said.

All of a sudden, I got the feeling someone was watching me but my empathic and telepathic senses didn't detect anything. "That's funny I can almost swear someone is watching me." I told myself. Little did I know, someone was, someone very powerful. To be continued.

1.) I thought I'd be able to do that because my mother could do it too.

Ch 9: All the food
After a while Katara, Sokka, Toph, and Aang came back and were carrying a lot of food.

"How much did you guys buy anyway?" I asked a little surprised at them. (1.)

"There's enough food for three meals a day for six days." Sokka replied.

“Good we'll need it if I'm thinking correctly.” I thought to myself.

"Is there any money left at all?" I asked.

"There's enough to last for a while." Katara said.

"Good, if my intuition is correct, we'll need it." I said.

"So what did you do while we were gone?" Katara asked.

"Well I kind of gained a healing ability." I said. (2.) “Cool I can heal too. Can you heal other people?” Katara asked curiously. (3.)

"Yeah, I think so because I healed my cat." I answered.

"Why was your cat hurt?" Toph said.

"I lost telekinetic focus, a rock broke and she got hurt." I replied.

After the conversation, Katara was cooking, & I didn't know where Sokka or Toph were. Aang and I were talking, " Did you ever get the feeling you were being watched?" I asked.

"No why do you ask?" Aang said. To be continued.

1.) How dare they spend so much of someone else’s money!

2.) I didn't feel the need to tell them at that moment about someone spying one me.

3.) Women of the Water Tribe can heal with the water they bend but they can’t heal like I can.

Ch 10: More talking
"Because someone is watching me only I don't know who it is." I said.

"Do you think they are from the Fire Nation?" Aang asked.

"I don't think so but I'm not ruling anything out yet." I replied

After we ate, everyone was talking and asking each other questions.

"So you two are from the South Pole?" I asked.

"Yeah, I'm a water bender." Katara said.

"The only one at the South Pole from what I'm told." (1.) I said. I hoped that one day Katara would trust me but it's about to get worse.

"And I'm a warrior." Sokka declared.

“So Toph, why do you think you are the greatest Earth bender in the world?” I asked.

“Because I can bend metal.” She said proudly.

“Really? That’s so cool, but how can you bend when you’re… you know.” I couldn’t bring myself to say it.

“Blind?” Toph replied.

“Yeah, that’s it.” I said.

“I can feel the vibrations in the earth and I use that to see.” Toph explained.

“That’s so cool!” I said. She nodded.

"You know what's weird? I had visions of you all before I even met you. I saw the attack on your home; you lost your mother didn't you?" I said to Sokka and Katara, hoping I didn't say the wrong thing.

"Yes, I really miss her." Katara replied sadly.

"I lost my mother too. She was very sick, and died when I was 7." I said. (2.)

"Aang it’s your turn to share something. What is your favorite memory from your past?" I asked knowing that his past upsets him, so I tried to keep everything happy. (3.)

"My favorite teacher I guess." Aang replied. We continued talking until nighttime. Then we went to sleep. To be continued.

1.) I went to the South Pole when I turned 6

2.) I made a big point of looking sad even though it was a sad moment. My mother died, as true as it was, I just couldn't be sad about it at that moment. When it happened I cried for 2 weeks until she started visiting me in my dreams, then, I couldn't wait to go to sleep.

3.) Okay I admit it I read his thoughts. I haven't ever seen him before and I needed stuff to talk about. It's a habit that I'm trying to stop. I will try my hardest to block out the thoughts in my head okay?

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Ch 11 part 1 of 2: The dream
I was dreaming and it was raining. (Obviously) I was at the kingdom, but not in my own body. I couldn't tell who I was. I looked at the ground and I was floating. I knew what I might be but not who I was.

A faeirie, sprite, or an imp, maybe even a pixie. I looked around and saw three little faeries, a white one, a pastel yellow one, and a light purple one. I recognized them; they were a few of my friends. (1.) But they were my real friends. They weren't after my money. (2.) I turned to the docks and saw that there was a small fire nation ship.

The ramp came down as a lot of solders and a teenager with a scar on he's face came off. Then they attacked; everyone ran screaming. The faeries couldn't help them because the consequences would be severe. To be continued.

1.) What? Don't you guys have friends that are faeries?

2.) I have some so called "friends" that just like me because I can buy them stuff. Faeries have their own money in their own world. They can't use earth money. (If you ever go to fairy world what ever you do don't eat anything because you'll be stuck there forever.)

Ch 11 part 2: The attack in the dream (Ok I ran out of titles)
The people were helpless; most of them couldn't bend. The others were inexperienced; only solders could fight the fire nation. They were all off fighting in the war.

The one with the scar seemed to be the leader; he shouted orders. His men were so obedient. One of the solders set fire to the market.

Another one kidnapped my father. I turned to the faeries; they were crying. The pastel yellow[/b] one started to glow; she looked angry. The others held her back to keep her from helping the humans. She kicked and screamed, but eventually calmed down.

"We have to help them! Emily, let us help them! How can you just let this happen?" The light purple one said.

"Emily? Did she just- no, it can't be. This just isn't possible." I thought not knowing that air benders (whether they can see the future or not) have visions in their dreams.

But Emily, the real one, was helping. I didn't realize it at the time but I was seeing the future through Emily's eyes. Emily was sending me a vision. To be continued.

Ch 12: Doggies Lol
I awoke suddenly thinking, "This couldn't be a vision because my friends were gone; all of the faeries were." Then I went back to sleep. ZZZ.

The next morning Katara and I were making breakfast... TOGETHER. "Hey Katara, I had a dream last night, it was weird. I wanted to ask you about it, just to be sure." I said. "To be sure of what?" Katara asked. "My mother sometimes had visions in her dreams." I explained.

"Okay, tell me about it." Katara said. "Well I can't really remember every face, but one stuck out. He had a scar around his eye." I described, feeling no need to mention my friends. "That sounds like Zuko, tell me what happened." Katara said in worry.

"He attacked the kingdom he looked like he was looking for something, or someone." I replied; I was worried now too. "We should tell Sokka, Aang, and Toph." Katara replied. "Tell us what?" Aang asked. "Someone named Zuko is going to attack my home." To be continued.

Ch 13 part 1: the plan
"How do you know?" Sokka asked. "I kind of saw it in a dream." I said. "And you expect me to believe that he will attack because you had a nightmare." Sokka said skeptically. "Well yeah, actually, unless you don't believe me. Plus my mother had visions in her dreams sometimes" I replied.

"Well ok we can go but only because we are ahead of schedule." Sokka said. "Yeah let's kick some Fire Nation butt!" Toph said excitedly. She'd been bored out of her mind apparently. "We'll need a plan. Does anyone have any ideas?" I asked already knowing I would be stuck with crowd control, as usual. (1.) We continued discussing plans while we ate and eventually that came up with one; with me as crowd control. Then we got ready to go to the kingdom.

I was meditating. It helps me focus. Aang was meditating too, I taught him. (2.) Sokka was practicing throwing his boomerang. He almost hit Momo and I wonder if it was on purpose or not. Toph was feeling the vibrations of the ground to figure out how far away they were. I don¡'t think it worked because they were traveling on water. Katara was collecting water for her animal skin bag thingy. Then we all headed for the kingdom, I kept an eye on the clouds, watching for rain.

1.) Every time, every single time there's something fun to do I get stuck on the sidelines. It's always, "Don't hurt the princess she's too valuable" or "you can't play because you'll send me to the dungeon if you loose" or "you can play if you either pay me or get someone out of trouble." and this one time this jerk said, "I'll let you play if you kiss me." I punched him in his face because I was 8 and didn't know any better. I was clearly wearing pink that day too. I don't even remember when I wore red the last time. The end... I'm just kidding lol! To be continued

2.) I taught him the chakras and stuff like where they are located and how to use them. He seemed to catch on very quickly, like he already knew. ;D

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Ch 13 part 2: Ok now the attack starts
I decided to morph into a person I imagined so no one would recognize me. When we got to the docks, the rain started. "Ok the attack is definitely today, and soon too." I alerted, very sure now.

"How do you know?" Katara asked. "I know because in my dream it was raining." I said as I looked around for my friends, who were nowhere to be found. We all looked at the docks and saw a small ship arriving. Then the gangplank came down and a lot of solders and Zuko came off. Everyone got ready to fight. "Spread out and find the Avatar!" Zuko ordered; his men listened. "Charming, isn't he?" I said trying to brighten the mood; no one laughed.

Aang walked into view of the solders. "Hey, over here!" He shouted to get their attention. Toph, Katara and Sokka followed Aang, while I moved people to safety. The solders started to run towards Aang, Katara, Sokka, and Toph to start the attack. Aang blew wind and knocked the first row down, doing a domino effect to the others. (1.) To be continued.

1.) HAHA how stupid do you have to be to stand in a line during a fight!

Ch 13 part 3: More fighting
Some of the solders got by Aang, so Katara, Sokka and Toph attacked them. Sokka threw his boomerang and hit one of them in the head. A solder fired upon Katara so she threw water at his fire. Toph lifted a tower of rock that stranded three solders in midair. Meanwhile, I was taking as many people as I could find to a safe place only some people wouldn't listen. (1.) I had to telekinetically pick people up and move them.

I put people in charge of making sure they stayed there. (2.) When everyone was safe, I went to help my friends. When I got there, they were surrounded. They tried to keep fighting but they were soon captured. "Hey, I know your not hurting my friends! Because If you are there will be serious consequences!" I shouted.

They looked at me as Zuko shouted, "What are you going to do, little girl!" I read his thoughts to find that he was thinking a girl as small as me couldn't stop him. It was like a superiority thing his thoughts were. He was thinking a girl wouldn't be a threat.

That made me angry. My eyes were glowing. (3.) I extended my arms, lifted people up and tossed them into the ocean; the solders attacked. To be continued.

1.) It’s just like at school. No matter how dangerous a fight could be, people always gather around to watch

2.) People of whom I knew were in charge, besides, I wasn't going to stay there. I had to go help my friends.

3 A.) That is just the worst thing you can do around me. Think that boys are better, stronger, smarter, and more powerful than girls. I hate that so much. I can only wish that my reincarnation would live in a better world. That is pure sexism right there.

3 B.) You can always tell how angry I am by how bright my eyes glow.

Ch 13 part 4: Don't make Shieara angry
As the solders attacked I was getting angrier, my eyes glowed brighter. One solder punched fire at me, the fire burned as it scorched my arm. Then I blew him into a cart.

Another one grabbed me from behind, I jumped up and flipped over; I had him now. (1.) I pushed him into three other solders, knocking them down. I continued fighting until I got to my friends and then I set them free.

"You guys think you can handle another fight?" I asked. "Yeah sure, can you?" Aang said gesturing to my arm. "Oh, yeah no problem." I reassured him, as we started to fight. Katara water-whipped two solders, even though she was running low on water. I saw this and, seeing as how I'm so nice, I telekinetically brought water from the ocean.

"Thanks Shieara." Katara said. "Don't mention it I'd do anything for my friends." I said. That thought froze Katara. She stopped and played it back many times. She stood there for a minute until I interrupted her broken record thinking. "Katara, you're about to get-" I couldn't say it fast enough. I suddenly decided to pick her up out of harms way until she came back to reality. As soon as I picked her up she came back.

"Are you okay?" I asked. "Yeah I'm okay. Thanks though." She replied. I put her down and we started to fight again. "What were you thinking about?" I asked. A single nothing was all I got out of her.

Toph was fighting about ten solders at once. She had already taken out about four of them at once. Then she took care of the rest by making the ground beneath them shake and break apart so they would fall in. As I watched out of the corner of my eye, my only thought was, “Wow, I wish I could earth bend!”

Aang went straight for Zuko, who was shocked to find me, the wonderful Shieara, air bending. Zuko snapped out of it and fired at Aang, who blew it away. Aang threw a wall of air at Zuko, knocking him down. To be continued.

1.) There were people in front of me that I kind of walked on and then I flipped over. It's actually really cool to watch.

[imwiccan]

i won't post another thing until someone else replies instead of just reading. i need replies!!!!!! thank you
blessed be

[Noodle]

this is really good!! i love it!!!